What is it about you
That entrances me so?
Engages my eyes,
So I can't let go?
I don't understand,
But I don't want to know.
To see you is amazing.
And thats the feeling
I don't want to let go.

What is it about you That entrances me so? Engages my eyes, So I can't let go? I don't understand, But I don't want to know. To see you is amazing. And thats the feeling I don't want to let go. |
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cheer up chipermunk don't let life get you down!
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The Pocky Bum
i like
gentle and fluffy
perfect for a smile
but eventually painful and tormenting,
what seems like Paradise then becomes Hell,
your heart trapped in a torturous prison cell,
no matter how hard one tries,
part of the soul eventually dies,
inside your mind a psychotic pain,
inside your heart pours sorrowful rain,
like the impurities of a fallen saint,
your spirit leaves the ordeal with an unholy taint.
Sorry to sorta bring down the whole cheery atmosphere, your poem really is nice and sweet, I just thought I should express my views on major crushes, what with all of mine bursting into flames. Again, I'm sorry to ruin the mood, I really like your poem, it's sweet.
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"The greatest thing you'll ever know, is just to love and be loved in return" -Moulin Rouge
"You'll never eliminate anxiety by avoiding the things that caused it" -James Collier
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"The greatest thing you'll ever know, is just to love and be loved in return" -Moulin Rouge
"You'll never eliminate anxiety by avoiding the things that caused it" -James Collier
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