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What is it about you
That entrances me so?
Engages my eyes,
So I can't let go?
I don't understand,
But I don't want to know.
To see you is amazing.
And thats the feeling
I don't want to let go.
©2004-2009 ~psyfan
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This is about my MAJOR crush (IN REAL LIFE w00t!) I saw/hung out with him at a recent con, and was inspired.


Copywrite(c)2004 Rebecca Shalvoy
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here we go...:giggles:
Chicky loves..somoneee...
I like this poem...good job

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cheer up chipermunk don't let life get you down!
>_>
P_P
H_H
I_I
L_L
<_<

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The Pocky Bum
cute and sweet
i like
gentle and fluffy
perfect for a smile
i love it . and it rymes those r the kind of poems i love
Crushes....... Sweet and elating in the beginning,
but eventually painful and tormenting,
what seems like Paradise then becomes Hell,
your heart trapped in a torturous prison cell,
no matter how hard one tries,
part of the soul eventually dies,
inside your mind a psychotic pain,
inside your heart pours sorrowful rain,
like the impurities of a fallen saint,
your spirit leaves the ordeal with an unholy taint.

Sorry to sorta bring down the whole cheery atmosphere, your poem really is nice and sweet, I just thought I should express my views on major crushes, what with all of mine bursting into flames. Again, I'm sorry to ruin the mood, I really like your poem, it's sweet.
Oh trust me, none of my crushes have ever come to anything. So I know all about the pain

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"The greatest thing you'll ever know, is just to love and be loved in return" -Moulin Rouge

"You'll never eliminate anxiety by avoiding the things that caused it" -James Collier
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Oh trust me, none of my crushes have ever come to anything. So I know all about the pain

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"The greatest thing you'll ever know, is just to love and be loved in return" -Moulin Rouge

"You'll never eliminate anxiety by avoiding the things that caused it" -James Collier

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